I like how you used a lot of slides to help communicate your message better and how you talk at an easy and understandable pace. The one thing that I think you could improve on would be editing the formatting on some of the slides as some of the elements of the format cover up parts of the images.
Star1: You state how you have grown clearly with points that tell why.
Star2: You had good visuals and images that help get the point across.
Wish: Try putting all citations in one place so that they are easier to see.
I like how you used a lot of slides to help communicate your message better and how you talk at an easy and understandable pace. The one thing that I think you could improve on would be editing the formatting on some of the slides as some of the elements of the format cover up parts of the images.
Star1: You state how you have grown clearly with points that tell why.
Star2: You had good visuals and images that help get the point across.
Wish: Try putting all citations in one place so that they are easier to see.